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hdr Alfie by ~Scott2206:iconScott2206:

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Please, please please please HELP me with this :D This is my first HDR and it's my prezzie for my housemates birthday. Soooo!!! If anyone could help me out on better HDR work (I merged using photoshop automate merge HDR command) that would great. But mostly advice on general touch ups, lighter, darker contracst ect. Please help I want to get it perfect for her and print it on a large canvas :D

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Mood: Love =raiawoman Apr 30, 2008, 7:14:07 PM
I really like it the way it is, very 3 dimensional. :D

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~velvetlily Apr 30, 2008, 7:48:36 PM
Hey Scott, it looks very cool
but if you were wanting to see how its looks maybe lighten and contast the elephanty
sculpture bit a lettie more......I'm not sure what a HDR is so this is all i could think of.
It looks pretty amazing to me!
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~bia37 Apr 30, 2008, 10:02:29 PM
thats very nice of you to give this picture to your friend.
wow amazing, nice shot
i like it how the main thing that u shot was clear and that the waterful/ water area was blurred out.
to my opinion maybe abit blue on the water but not too much, u wana keep it focus on the elephant, but to my opinion the elephant doesnt need any changes.. but hey thats just me.

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*Rom3o May 1, 2008, 4:05:01 AM
Yeah this is actualy a brilliant shot.

possibly some desaturation of the blue in the forground and mroe saturation in the back ground,
because of the aperture or deliberate focus point, the back ground being blured is great but i personaly
find it unpleasent on the eyes because of the composition.

regardless youve done well im sure your partner wil love it.

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~Scott2206 May 1, 2008, 7:25:03 AM
Wicked, thank you soooo much for the comment. the 3D affect is the HDR I love that look but there are some really nice examples on dA of this that look a lot better than this :D

Thank you...

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~Scott2206 May 1, 2008, 7:29:26 AM
Thank you. I will give that a go later and see how it looks. Thank you for helping out its much apprecited :licking:

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~Scott2206 May 1, 2008, 7:33:55 AM
Yeah I thought that about the blue water but my head was in a blank and I couldn't think of how I could tone it down abit. Desaturate the water maybe? I'll give it go.

Thak you for your help, means alot :D

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~Scott2206 May 1, 2008, 7:36:04 AM
Yey thank you, Yeah I am going to try the desat of the blue and will give the background sat a go too.

Thank you very much for your help on this, means alot. :D

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*Rom3o May 1, 2008, 7:52:59 AM
no worries, but remember no one is to say what is right and what is wrong,
you make sure your happy with it and thats what matters.

i only say what i say because the foreground doesnt fill the photo enough,
so because the back ground still consumes a lot of the image and is blured
it just hassles the visual harmony.

goodluck let me know if u change anything =)

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